Subject: RE: Final (?) Version.
From: Greg Landsberg <landsberg@hep.brown.edu>
Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2006 19:09:03 -0400
To: 'pedro mercadante' <mercadan@fnal.gov>
CC: "'Sergio M. Lietti'" <lietti@fnal.gov>

Hi Pedro,

Looks good. A few comments:

0) Put page numbers - it would make it easier for people to comment during your presentation.

1) P2 - PYTHIA is misspelled;

2) P7 - CTEQ5L is misspelled;

3) So, all the "right-hand" plots are after the "best" cuts, not just the SS requirement?

4) State signal significance and expected yield after these cuts.

5) I think what you put for the SS dimuons is sufficient.

6) In the conclusions I'd also emphasize SS e-mu channel, not just SS dimuons.

Greg